Often, we hear that age is a mere number,
But also wonder if it makes us dumb and dumber;
Unless proper and timely steps are taken through channels right,
The chances of our becoming dull happen to be bright.
The body needs all the care and affection it can get,
The mind needs to be kept active, not to forget;
The soul needs nourishment of a different kind,
Otherwise it is left in torment and in a bind.
The zeal of youth makes us leap light-heartedly into traps,
The spirit of adventure keeps us wandering off the known maps;
Romantics at heart, fragile in maturity, we jump at gold coins with strings attached,
We behave like zombies, often getting disappointed over chickens un-hatched.
When advanced in age, our optimism fades, no longer making the spirits lift,
A feeling grows that our guardian angels no longer care to bear a gift;
Our triumphs are many, but all sound mellowed and get under-rated,
The aged machinery creaks, a depression often seeps in unabated.
Each day, we shudder to look at a stranger in the mirror,
With brittle bones, fuzzy brains and a heart which is all of a twitter;
Different organs protest, the lining of the stomach seeks our regular attention,
Willing to try any system of medicine, keeping fit being the mere intention.
The mellow wisdom of advancing age we often forget to treat as an asset,
Giving back to society and relishing an inner glow before we walk into the sunset;
Doing what we always dreamed of doing does bring in a wholesome joy,
Listening to the body, nourishing it with a healthy diet, is the right ploy.
The world is still waiting with open arms, to be explored by us,
Glorious sunsets, resplendent seashores and deep gorges beckon us;
Sunshine eager to bathe us, gentle breeze to caress our wrinkled face,
River rapids and waterfalls aspire to spray us with natural grace.
Sleeping under the canopy of a star-studded sky on quiet nights,
The moon showering us with its soft azure rays with full might;
The sweet fragrance of flowers missed on the tortuous highway of life,
Await our attention in a lovely phase with minimum strife.
Time to take it easy and have a circle of friends around,
A tissue restorative on one side, a Plum book on the other, and our joy is unbound;
Soaking in the strains of soothing music and catching up on a classic movie,
An outpouring of creative juices, some light exercise, and life is groovy.
Basking in the inner glow of satisfaction, enjoying a deep sense of fulfillment,
For having crossed major landmarks of our lives on this firmament;
Oh, the freedom of soaring at will, free of the sap of life’s intricate bee-hives,
Pursuing our hobbies and passions dreamed of all through our lives.
Wondering if we can leave behind some marks on the shifting sands of time,
Motivating the coming generations to aspire beyond a penny and a dime;
Living the values, ethics, norms and beliefs we expect them to follow,
Always feeling positive, never believing that we lived our lives hollow.
(Related posts:
https://ashokbhatia.wordpress.com/2014/01/12/6-things-to-do-before-you-turn-60
https://ashokbhatia.wordpress.com/2016/01/10/ode-to-old-age)
I love your poetry. You get right to the nub of things with this one. I have far too many chickens unhatched!
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Thank you, Honoria. I guess almost all of us have precisely the same problem, irrespective of our age, sex, religion or nationality!
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I quite agree – all bound by a shared humanity.
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As a 76 year old, I so identified with your insightful poem. My wife and i are soon to leave for Italy to study intensive Italian for a month, then I will be teaching a course in Assisi on Franciscan spirituality. We ain’t done yet!
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Wow….that is great. Wish you a very long innings ahead.
Appreciate your thoughtful comment!
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While the poetry is appreciable,I do not share the negativity in the initial paragraphs and helplessness in later ones..I think if we keep our spirits high and focussed, we need not think about the numbers. Let’s strive to achieve the intrinsic pleasures,find something or the other positive without bothering much to the eventualities.
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Well said. Spoken like a true friend. The underlying idea is to convey that advancing age needs to be enjoyed and not despised. After all, it is merely a number!
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Everything written above, deserves my congratulations, more or less I feel like that…., I envy this way of writing .
Regards from Barcelona, Spain
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Dear Rosa, thank you so much for your lovely comment. Glad that you felt connected. Best regards, Ashok Bhatia from Pondicherry, India!
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By the way…Like you I enjoyed some time ago when I read some books by P G Wodehouse. Regards,
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I simply love his works. Permit me to share this post with you:
https://ashokbhatia.wordpress.com/2014/02/04/piggy-maudie-and-a-seasoned-romance/
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Gotta keep learning and doing to keep sharp. Great wisdom in your poetry!
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Well summed up. Thank you for going through and commenting!
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